eBay Item Description Writing Tips
Back to class, boys and girls! Regular school is starting next week, and your eBay class gets back to business as well.
Once you’ve drawn the buyers in with your great title, the next thing to do is to tell them all about your fantastic item with the description. If you can write it in such a way that after reading it, they simply don’t see how they could have done without all those years, you’ve succeeded! But just what should you write in your description?
At its core your item description is really an ad. Without making it too obvious, you should be writing sales copy. You’re trying to get buyers excited about your products, and that’s usually hard - but on eBay, if you have the right thing to sell and give enough all-important details, the buyers almost excite themselves.
Technical Details
Include every technical detail you know, including the item’s manufacturer, its condition, the sizes (length, height, width and if appropriate its weight), where and when it was made, its history, and anything else special about it. Don’t be too boring, though: the best descriptions are written in a friendly, conversational tone, and show a real knowledge of the item. And whatever you do, make sure you tell the truth! Embellishing an item and making it look better than it really is backfires. Every single time. It’s one of the easiest ways to earn a (deservedly) negative feedback from a buyer.
Remember that most of the people who’ll be buying your item will often be just as knowledgeable about it as you are, if not more - this is their hobby, and they’re experts. Don’t feel like you need to explain the basics of the item: just go into as much technical detail as you can. As a rule, don’t write anything in the description if you don’t know what it means, as the chances are someone will, and if you’ve got it slightly wrong then you’ll look like you don’t know what you’re talking about.
Interesting Details
You might find that you enjoy writing a few things about how you got the item, why you’re selling it, and who you think might like it. This isn’t strictly necessary, but it gives your auctions some character and a personal touch, and can make people more likely to trust you. People might wonder what you’re doing selling 500 CDs all at once, and if you tell them the reason (”I copied them all to MP3 files”), then they’ll feel reassured that nothing dodgy is going on. If you’re selling them because you’re having a baby and you need the space, just say so.
Write as Much as You Can
Leave nothing out of your description, even if that seems to you like it makes it cumbersomely long. There is no way you can be too thorough: someone, somewhere will appreciate that you took the time to write the extra information. Take a look at other ads for the same item as you are selling or something similar and notice how many sellers are very sparse in their description. That’s an opportunity for you to stand out from the crowd and shine.
Don’t assume that anyone who wants extra information will email you to ask a question: many buyers are shy and won’t do it. (but if they do, answer their questions ASAP!) Think of questions that buyers might have and add the answers to your description, as people generally tend to ask the same questions over and over again.
Each time a buyer does email you with a question, you should both answer their question and update your description so that it will include the answer next time or you can elect to have the question and your answer show at the bottom of the listing, courtesy of eBay. I usually edit the listing if it’s substantial. If people ask questions that are answered in the description, try putting these parts of the auction on a line alone, or in bold, to make them easier to notice. If one person took the time and effort to ask a question that was obvious to you, there are probably 20 more potential buyers who simply moved on when they did not see the answer to the same question.
Writing good copy for your item eventually will become second nature. Like anything else: practice makes perfect. Read the descriptions of others and learn from them. note what you as a buyer liked, did not like and what you think was missing from their description. Then resolve not to make the same mistake in your own description.
In the last post in this series I’ll discuss how to increase traffic to your listing. There are a lot of things you can do in that respect.